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I TESTED if AI could WRITE Popular TV Shows… (Wednesday, White Lotus, Succession Scripts)



Published June 27, 2023, 12:20 a.m. by Arrik Motley


The rise of AI poses a looming threat to Hollywood's film and tv industry.🤖 WGA screenwriters are striking against film studios in an attempt to regulate the use of AI in productions.🪧 Today, we are going to test whether AI can write popular television shows better than professional screenwriters.📝 Will AI be able to write compelling script scenes? Can this technology replace Hollywood writers? In this experiment, we'll compare the original pilot scripts of three popular shows, "wednesday," "succession," and "White Lotus," to the AI's version.👀 Subscribe, and I hope you enjoy the video!

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00:00​ Introduction to the Experiment

02:28 Original wednesday Pilot Script

08:50 AI Version of wednesday

14:06 Let's Review: AI vs wednesday

15:04 Original White Lotus Pilot Script

17:41 AI Version of White Lotus

21:32 Let's Review: AI vs White Lotus

22:40 Original succession Pilot Script

24:58 AI Version of succession

28:08 Let's Review: AI vs succession

28:23 Conclusion & Outro

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today we are going to test whether AI

can write popular television shows

better than Hollywood writers can AI

replicate the craft that goes into

writing a scene is it possible that AI

could replace all Hollywood writers and

become the new writer of your favorite

television shows we're going to find out

in this video AI taking over people's

jobs is a huge threat looming over a ton

of different professions right now I

actually watched a YouTube video where

AI tried to do different people's jobs

and a lot of the commenters were saying

that the people look like they're

threatened by all the AI and what it can

do if a robot was going to unemploy me

take my income in my livelihood you know

I would be threatened and defensive too

and the threat of AI has a choke hold on

the Hollywood film industry right now if

you saw my last video then you would

know a little bit about Ai and how

Hollywood writers are on strike because

the wga is trying to prevent AI from

replacing them in their jobs striking

writers say now is the time to address

AI I mean they're basically plagiarism

machines we set very specific parameters

around it it cannot be considered mirror

material you cannot rewrite with it

there must be a person associated with

it that will keep it constrained within

what it is a tool not an end goal or

Creator and if you saw my last video you

would know that I made a pretty bold

claim that AI could not do the job of a

writer they couldn't do it as well and I

was thinking Michaela have you even

tested this have you even tried to see

if it actually can write as good as a

Hollywood writer

today I'm going to put my bias and my

passions aside I'm going to give my

honest professional opinion I have been

reading scripts for 10 years of my life

ever since I was 9 years old I know what

a good script sounds like I've been

working in this industry for 10 years

I'm also studying screenwriting at USC

School cinematic Arts one of the top

film schools in the world

so I think I know how to tell what a

good script looks like it's already hard

enough to be an artist and make a living

so AI is just making it even harder but

if you want to support an artist be sure

to subscribe to this channel I plan and

film and edit all of my videos and it

would really mean the world to me if you

subscribed and just supported an artist

because ai's gonna take my job

[Music]

so Michaela how in the world are you

even going to test this technology we

are going to read original script scenes

from the pilots of three different TV

shows Wednesday White Lotus and

succession once we've read the scene I'm

gonna go over and tell AI to write a

scene and kind of describe what's going

on describe the characters and we'll see

what it does first we're going to start

with the Netflix hit Wednesday the

series creators are Miles Millar and

Alfred go so they must be writing

Partners yeah they're writing partners

because a lot of their credits are the

same they wrote Hannah Montana together

The Mummy for all the shows that we're

reviewing I'm only going to be reading

what's in the pilot scripts just so I

don't spoil anything if you guys haven't

seen the show stuff from Act One nothing

very important

well act one is actually a very

important act it's the setup Act without

it you don't know what's going on okay

fade in exterior Nancy Reagan High

School day to establish as All-American

as Hostess cupcakes and the NRA the sign

out front proudly declares Nancy Reagan

High School home of the Mustangs you can

already see the personality from the

first line of the action line as

All-American as Hostess CupCakes

interior hallway Nancy Reagan High

School day pre-class Insanity Reigns

students frantically crisscross the

frame through the Technicolor throng of

JanSport backpacks in Brandy Melville

ensembles one face stands out wearing a

signature black dress and two perfect

braids meet Wednesday Adams 15. her

legendary wit is still sharper and then

a razor wire and puberty has Amplified

her uniquely warped worldview she cuts a

line through her fellow students like a

great white through a school of tuna

they really like the similes here as she

walks she's met with looks of fear or

derision both of which secretly please

her the writer ties in you know sharper

than razor wire and then cuts it it adds

a tone I'm not sure whose Twisted idea

it was to put hundreds of adolescents

some underfunded schools

people whose dreams were crushed years

ago but I admire the sadism I want you

to imagine having to come up with this

while I'm reading it imagine coming up

with these words and these ideas these

came from humans because this is harder

than it looks go try up ahead she sees a

group of students gathered around a

locker muffled screams Echo from inside

as Wednesday approaches the teens

guiltily scatter suspicious she wrenches

open the locker door and out tumbles her

brother Pugsley Adams 13. he's been

hogtied with an apple shoved in his

mouth she unsympathetically Yanks the

Apple free the conciseness of this is

also very impressive because a lot of

people who are new to writing they try

and explain all that just happened in

very long chunks they get done

I want names don't normally work honest

he begins to blubber Wednesday's cool

demeanor cracks so fast because the

emotion equals weakness pull yourself

together now but when she grips the

shoulders her head whips back and she

experiences a psychic Vision it's liquid

and blurred at the edges in a series of

visceral flashes she sees Three teen

boys grab hugs and tile up and stuff him

in the locker all wear red and white

varsity jackets emblazoned with the

school's stallion mascot and water polo

Gods printed on the back the vision ends

the details that are there and what's

really smart is the writer chooses to

give this Exposition through you know

visual cues with the vision and all that

stuff instead of you know Pugsley saying

oh these boys beat me up you know what I

mean instead of giving Exposition

through dialogue which is usually it

doesn't go down well we don't digest

that type of food well it's hard to

swallow when we see it visually it's

smooth like butter okay and that type of

exposition is very smart and that's

something that I worry about with AI I'm

not sure if AI will be able to do that

much visual storytelling I feel like

it'll be very on the nose but we'll see

stay tuned Pugsley concerned are you

okay Wednesday nods collects herself

leave this to me Pugsley even more

concerned Wednesday what are you going

to do Wednesday smirks knowingly what I

do best off Wednesday a plan formulating

um also a little disclaimer I have not

seen um Wednesday comment down below if

I should watch it if it's worth my time

I know it was really popular cut to

underwater looking up at a collection of

muscular legs kicking furiously camera

Rises revealing we are interior swimming

pool Nancy Reagan High School day I love

that transition again it's thinking

visually the camera Rises it's showing

the director what you know they need to

take from this so the water polo team is

in mid-practice even in red Speedos

these dudes exude smarmy jock

entitlement and another thing about

screenwriting that I see all the time is

the writer tries to explain like the

type of vibe the energy that you see in

everyday life to try and kind of

translate to the reader like you know

how these background actors should be

portraying or how they should look so

when you're casting for background

actors they need to kind of look like

this I don't know if AI will be able to

be like oh they exude this energy like

how do you know what energy is Babe like

this video And subscribe you see all

that stuff I gotta edit that if that

subscribe button down there is red

red flag if it's gray oh we cool babe

you got good luck Wednesday emerges from

the tunnel under the bleachers and

approaches the pool she scans the

players until her eyes lock on the team

captain Dalton we recognize him as one

of pugliest tormentors from her Vision

Dalton regards her mockingly Dalton hey

freak this is a close practice the

others laugh in jeer but Wednesday

remains isily impervious to their taunts

the only person who gets to torture my

brother is me Wednesday pulls her hands

from behind her back and holds up two

large clear plastic bags each filled

with water and a dozen piranha with a

casual flick of her wrist she tosses the

bags into the water Bob's eyes go wide

flailing chaos erupts as the players

frantically swim for the sides Dalton

desperately swims for a ladder

underwater piranha POV swimming towards

him lured by the white number 23 on his

Speedos Wednesday observing the Mayhem

unfold with the cold it's happening of a

scientist watching the bikini Reef

blasts Dalton reaches the ladder is

about to haul himself up underwater

piranha POV as the lead leader of the

pack of zeros in on the white 23 on

Dalton Speedo off Dalton's Unholy

high-pitched screen smash cut two main

titles what I love again about that

whole sequence of action each Action

Line is basically for you know the

director to kind of Envision we're

cutting between dong and then the

piranha and then Wednesday we see each

POV as it's going on again it's thinking

visually also the creativity of thinking

about dropping piranhas and that is

visual Exposition as well because it's

showing Wednesday is ruthless and she's

unsympathetic maybe even sociopathic

finding a way an activity to show her

personality rather than somebody being

like you're so mean Wednesday and that

on the nose dialogue which is what I

worry about for AI now let's see the

ai's version so I just opened up chat

um I'm gonna ask it to do something for

me I'm gonna ask you to do some for me

can you do a song for me

write me a script called open to a

dramatic television show about a girl

named Wednesday she does not fit into

the preppy High School crowd she wears

dark colors and has an intimidating

demeanor Wednesday sticks out like sore

thumb include a beat where she finds her

brother Pugsley tied up in locker and

give Exposition about him getting

bullied Wednesday decides to get revenge

on her brother's bullies by surprising

the bullies at their water pool practice

with something dangerous send it

oh it's writing really quickly

okay

let's see what it wrote oh my gosh that

was really quick title Wednesday's

Revenge interior high school hallway day

the bustling hallway of a preppy High

School is filled with students chatting

and laughing among them Wednesday a

teenage girl with long dark hair dressed

in black from head to toe stands out

like a Gothic anomaly her intimidating

demeanor and unique style catch the

attention of her peers it definitely set

the environment of the hallway

um you know I just said at school but it

really put us in a location which is

exactly what the writers did it was in

the hallway I'm pretty sure I will say

that the Action Line doesn't have as

much personality as the writers you know

it conveyed this information in a very

basic way like saying a preppy high

school instead the writers said they're

wearing Brandy Melville and JanSport

it's getting very All-American like the

hostess so using those elements to not

exactly say that is basic but you know

from those brands that it is very basic

it's a smarter way to convey that

information without being very on the

nose and blunt about it by saying it's a

preppy High School interior High School

Walker area day Wednesday walks down the

quarter her heavy boots echoing with

each step okay including sound she

glances around observing the students

who pass by whispering and occasionally

shooting hers glances in her Direction

Wednesday stops in front of a row of

lockers her eyes narrowing as she senses

something amiss I like that you know

she's sensing something because it's

kind of how she had those special Senses

in the other scene through a sliver in

the locker we catch a glimpse of Pugsley

Wednesday's younger brother with a

disheveled appearance fear is evident in

his eyes and his mouth is taped shut

fear is evident in his eyes no that I

don't know about that that's bad to me

Wednesday whispering to herself Pugsley

Wednesday wastes no time she takes a

deep breath her resolve strengthening

and quickly reaches into her backpack

retrieving a small tool kit with expert

positions she scopefully unlocks a

locker freeing her distress brother yeah

it's too much explaining there hugsley

relieved Wednesday thank goodness you

found me they tied me up and left me

here see what I'm saying about the

dialogue Exposition they tied me up here

and left me like babe if we can see

visually that you are tied up you don't

need to say it Wednesday cuts the tape

off Pugsley's mouth

if he was talking

then but he had tapeovers

he had a line before that so how was he

talking if there was taper okay whatever

Wednesday angrily who did this to you

pugly Pugsley's face Falls his voice

trembling Pugsly nervously it's the

water polo team they've been tormenting

me for weeks Wednesday's eyes narrow a

dangerous glint reflecting her thirst

for justice Wednesday intense they won't

get away with this pugly I promise you

that we didn't need that line smart

writers they'll just be like off her

look you know and then made that line

reflecting a thirst for justice cut two

right off Wednesday's look we can

already tell that there's something

Brewing exterior High School pool day

[Music]

the real show

oh because it's water polo I was like

wait how did it know it was at a pool

but I inputted water polo so they know

Wednesday dressed in our signature dark

attire if we already said the Wardrobe

and she it's not a new day we don't need

to reset it again stands near the

entrance to the high school pool the

sounds of splashing water and laughing

emanate from within

Wednesday takes a deep breath composing

herself and reaches into her backpack

once again she pulls out a mysterious

object covered in dark cloth and grips

it tightly in her hand mysterious object

time to show them the consequences of

their actions

see how the other writers their dialogue

had so much personality this is like

infomercial and I know that you can

input even more information for the AI

to kind of mold it better to what you

want but we're just going off the first

draft with determination burning in our

eyes Wednesday slowly approaches the

glass entrance to the pool area she

pushes the doors open revealing the

unsuspecting water polo team practicing

in the pool the team members turn their

heads in surprise their smiles feeding

has a witness Wednesday's menacing

presence Wednesday coldly surprise boys

let's have some fun

as Wednesday step forward the camera

pans down to reveal what she holds in

her hand a remote control

what the cloth slips off revealing a

Sinister looking device with blinking

lights and a faint hum the water pool

team's faces twist into expressions of

shock and concern realizing that

Wednesday means business Fade Out note

the script is a fictional creation for

entertainment purposes remember to

handle sensitive subjects like revenge

and dangerous actions with caution and

promote positive resolutions in real

life situations

so that was the AI scene let's review

what did I like about it I was actually

very surprised at how it laid out you

know this sequence of scenes the

locations and kind of describing the

environment I was very impressed by

um what I didn't like or what I wasn't

very impressed with won the ending just

a random Sinister device clearly this

shows that if you are writing with AI

you really do have to help it out I'm

clearly seeing that this is more of a

tool for a writer as a writer you still

have to put together what is that

revenge or what is this you know what I

mean because an AI is not going to do it

it doesn't have that creativity I will

say that the AI seems like it could lay

out a very cool structure for you know

whatever you're writing but you really

have to fill it in really make it your

own add that flavor personalize the

dialogue so it doesn't just sound

boilerplate did the AI do better than

the actual writers

I would say no the AI did a first drop

version and granted this is the first

draft that I gave the AI but now it's

time to move on to the next show the

White Lotus arrivals episode one written

by Mike White

the genius Mike White who'd won an Emmy

for writing let's read the opening to

White Lotus fade in interior airplane

Day Shane 30s is handsome but looks like

he's been through the ringer a flight

attendant hands him a cocktail which he

gulps down sitting next to him is an

older couple he gulps down the cocktail

that already shows he's in distress that

is already telling us something not him

saying oh I'm so stressed out thank you

flight attendant like it's been a long

day I've really been through the ringer

obviously this opening scene is

different than what was actually printed

in the um you know Final Cut sitting

next to him is an older couple older

woman you headed home she nods absently

older woman us too I hate the end of

things especially vacations older man

what are we going back to world's gone

crazy

Shane forces a current smile Mike White

is so good with voices it just sounds

real

we were at the aminari it was fine the

food was good not much to do there but

we just like to sit around anyway which

hotel were you at

Lotus

White Lotus

our guide told us someone was

Sheen turns and looks at them Gravely

Shane while he's on our plane off their

reaction you didn't see them loaded on

the plane they shake their heads older

woman what is it on ice or older man

what happened Shane just shakes his head

at a loss older woman changes the

subject

well other than that did you have a good

vacation the woman Smiles Shane finishes

his drink then I only mean

congratulations how wonderful was it

everything you hoped

where's your wife yeah where's your wife

Shane says nothing but the English look

on his face silences the inquisitive

couple

the flight attendant passes Shane Taps

her as she passes Shane mumbles can I

get another drink

shoot the intended gives a perfunctory

nod heading off older man here take mine

the older man sends to Shane State

reaches over and drops his cocktail on

Shane's tray Shane doesn't even smile he

sculpt it down because the other couple

deserves with concern Shane sets Down

The Empty Glass and exhales deeply the

Roar of the plane's engine disrupts the

moment and we smash cut too and the fact

that he's avoiding the question about

the wife that in itself says so much

without saying anything it allows us the

audience to put the puzzle pieces

together thinking about the information

that we know the dead body and that his

wife is not there with him and that also

makes us as the audience want to watch

more to find out what happened now let's

see the AI version of White Lotus

write me an opening scene to a dramatic

television show about a man named Shane

who just finished a vacation in Hawaii

the scene takes place on an airplane

Shane looks exhausted something's

Weighing on him he asks a flight

attendant for a drink on the flight a

nearby couple of tourists try to chat

with Shane about how his vacation was

Shane is very open about the experience

please reveal that Shane was on his

honeymoon there's a dead body on the

plane and that his wife is not sitting

next to him on the flight send it

oh

oh it's really thinking it's really

thinking okay and here it is interior

airplane cabin day a weary looking Shane

late 30s sits by the window in an

airplane cabin his eyes fixed on the

passing clouds the hum of engines fills

the air as the plane makes its way

through the sky Shane appears exhausted

the weight of something heavy evident in

his expression a friendly flight

attendant approaches wearing a warm

smile I'm seeing a lot of parentheticals

right now and that is a big No-No you

usually don't tell the actor how to act

usually your line of dialogue should

kind of be a signal to the tone because

as you see in the White Lotus script

there's barely any parentheticals only

when there's a shift or really something

important but not directing the actor

this is directing the actor which is not

good flight attendant should Fleet good

afternoon sir how can I assist you Shane

gently can I have a drink please

something strong if you don't mind

that's good that's good AI really picked

up that he needed something strong that

he's stressed out that was a good line

my tent nods understanding the unspoken

request for Solace and heads toward the

beverage cart across the aisle a jovial

couple of tourists early 40s glance and

Shane's Direction their faces still

sun-kissed from a tropical vacation okay

I like that excitedly oh God these

parentheticals oh my gosh there's more

parentheticals hey there just got back

from Hawaii ourselves how was your trip

buddy it's bad dialogue but it's also

like the Taurus being annoying which is

good for the scene in a way because

Shane clearly doesn't want to deal with

anything so in a way that is kind of a

good choice having the characters be

completely opposite more fuel for Shane

to get more stressed out it's bad

dialogue but it works right now if that

makes sense Shane monotone it was fine

Taurus woman grinning oh come on Hawaii

is Paradise you must have had a blast

Shane's eyes drift toward the empty seat

behind him where his wife should have

been sitting he clenches his jaw his

knuckles turning white okay so that's

also an error film and television is a

visual medium just because you said in

an action line a very important thing

about where his wife should have been

sitting nobody when this is on screen

can read that action line so nobody's

gonna know based off a look that he

thinks his wife should be sitting there

that's a problem because that's a very

important information that nobody will

see only the reader of the script will

see you know what I mean that's more

like novel writing not screenwriting

Shane softly yeah Paradise for some the

flight attendant returns placing a drink

in front of Shane he gnaws appreciation

takes a long contemplative step as the

plane shakes slightly revealing hidden

turbulence the atmosphere grows tense a

commotion arises from the rear of the

cabin causing heads to turn Shane's eyes

widen as he notices the commotion his

heart pounding in his chest he glances

back spotting a group of panicked

passengers huddled around something his

Gaze fixates on a dead body covered in a

blanket carried by two flight attendants

making their way through the cabin the

reality of the situation hits him hard

his mind racing with disbelief Shane's

hands tremble causing his drink to spill

but he barely notices he searches the

cabin frantically desperately trying to

find his wife but

site the realization draws upon Shane's

face an ominous storm brewing within him

overshadowing the paradise he had just

left behind

Fade Out wow very dramatic at the end

um my camera died we have my Vlog camera

which is a very wide angle lens but I

guess you guys can see a little bit more

of like what's

on let's get into what I liked about the

scene the AI was able to make it Arc you

know it wasn't a stagnant scene

something happened at the end

um and things changed so I did really

enjoy that I also liked

um you know the first part was Shane and

the drink what I wasn't very impressed

by it feels very prose it feels very

novel-like there's too many action lines

and that's a trend there's way too many

parentheticals which is a huge no no no

no no no I also really like how it came

to the conclusion that you know the

realization that that's his wife like it

was able to allow us to put the puzzle

pieces together like Mike White did

about thinking well the wife is gone and

then oh there's a dead body except we as

the audience wouldn't know that the wife

is gone because he never said it you

know what I mean like it was just an

action line and there was no way for us

to tell because we're not reading a

script we're watching the TV show yeah

an ominous storm brewing within him

overshadowing the Paradigm like that all

that would be like off Shane's look we

you know what I mean manipulate

something like that like really short

did AI write White Lotus better than

Mike White

in my opinion it did not lastly we're

going to look at succession the pilot

script of succession written by Jesse

Armstrong interior room

black

the unsteady POV of someone groping

through a darkened room hands out ahead

bang a wall

the right is really putting us in the

scene the figure we're following wasn't

expecting that hands flat against the

wall hand over hand looking for an

opening oh my gosh even the choice of

the writer using fragments fragmented

sentences adds to that kind of like

disillusion right y'all don't understand

I'm a nerd I'm a nerd okay I'm grateful

that you're watching this far to be

honest Logan where the F am I okay

here's the opening our figure was

seeking

Marcia off screen Logan it's okay Logan

are guys in somewhere now into the room

he was seeking okay everything is okay

he knows what he's doing now Logan to

himself ugh okay okay the shuffle of bed

clothes as Mercia climbs out of bed then

we hear the sound of what water dripping

onto something soft and then boom lights

on and all is bright and Stark and

sudden and what do we have an 80 year

old man Logan Roy in his shorts and

t-shirt pissing towards a laundry basket

in a walk-in wardrobe lined with freshly

arrived suits and shirts dark urine

stutters across the Deep white pile of

thick carpet dampening it down like hot

piss on wet snow

I stand in solidarity with the wga keep

me keep these keep these Riders Logan is

momentarily terrified but then a younger

woman early 50s is in the doorway her

hands across her nakedness pulling

something on it's okay Logan where am I

Marcia it's okay we're in the new place

it's okay Logan New York 3 12 a.m he

computes this information as we cut from

Logan's rebooting face too and that's

the opening scene from succession

it's so hard also for me as a creative

to like explain what the writer's doing

when I see it especially because I've

been reading scripts for so long it's

just good and you know I'm gonna leave

it at that now let's see the AI version

of succession

write me an opening scene to a dramatic

television show about an old man who

wakes up in the middle of the night

looking for a bathroom in the dark he

struggles to find the bathroom and ends

up peeing on the floor of a closet when

the lights turn on we can tell that the

man lives a life of luxury based on the

New York City apartment and clothes in

the closet include a beat where his

spouse helps him out of the situation

interior luxury New York City Apartment

bedroom night a spacious bedroom

elegantly decorated with Rich fabrics

and tasteful artwork Moonlight filters

through the sheer curtains casting a

soft glow on the room in the dimly lit

space we see an elderly man John 70s

dignified yet frail stirring in his

sleep his eyes flare open and he Squints

into the darkness disoriented John

grumbling

gotta find the bathroom

so again it's on the nose but what did

we expect from AI slowly sits up his

movement's tentative as if the weight of

age burdens him Jon reaches for

Spectacles on the nightstand and puts

them on he swings his leg over the side

of the bed and gingerly places his feet

on the plush carpet exterior luxury New

York City Apartment hallway night so

we're outside

um John shuffles through the bedroom

door into a grand hallway adorned with

intricate paintings and antique

furniture his eyesight hindered by the

lack of light strains to make out his

surroundings John muttering which way is

it he hesitates then starts down the

hallway his steps slow and unsure as he

walks his grip tightens on the edge of

his bathrobe his knuckles turning white

interior New York City luxury apartment

walk-in closet night John pushes open a

door thinking it leads to the bathroom

instead he stumbles into a closet filled

with designer clothes and expensive

accessories he Squints trying to make

sense of his mistake okay what in the

world unaware of his surroundings John

fumbles with the tithes bathrobe

thinking it's the bathroom's light

switch she unties it unless the robe

fall open standing exposed in the

opulent closet suddenly the lights snap

on revealing the Grandeur of the Space

John's eyes widened in realization

embarrassment as he discovers his

mistake interior New York City luxury

apartment closet night this is really

long john spell house Elizabeth like 60s

elegant compassionate stands in the

doorway wearing a satin robe she looks

at John a mixture of amusement and

concern on her face Elizabeth teasingly

these freaking parentheticals darling I

think you've taken a wrong turn John's

face remnants and he tries to cover

himself hastily wrapping the bathrobe

around his body Elizabeth walks toward

him a gentle smile playing on her lips

Elizabeth softly come on dear let's get

you to the bathroom just take out the

action line and just have it Elizabeth

darling I think you've taken a wrong

turn come on let's get you to the

bathroom that's it you don't need all of

this stuff it's too much Elizabeth takes

John's hand and leads him out of the

closet guiding him through the hallway

her touch comforting and familiar the

scene Fades out leaving us with a sense

of the elderly couples enduring love and

the challenges they face together in

their world of luxury and aging

yeah who did it better AI or Jesse

Armstrong we don't even need an

explanation

for this specific scene I didn't like

anything I'm so

like anything of this but tell me if I'm

wrong leave a comment down below am I

wrong in conclusion do I think AI can

write better than Hollywood television

writers

no was I impressed with the AI yeah I

was actually really impressed at how

quickly it could create a scene with

actually some of the arcs of the scenes

and the way it was able to describe

different environments and characters

but I definitely can tell that it needs

the hand of a writer it needs the

creativity of a human it also includes a

lot of screenwriting faux pas overuse of

parentheticals and way too many action

lines that break up the flow of dialogue

it's just over descriptive it's way too

descriptive to me right now seems kind

of like a tool that writers can use in

the process of screenwriting AI is

constantly getting better and this was

already pretty good like AI can do a job

maybe not a good one it maybe can write

a better pilot than the idol

yes shade Throne Sam Levinson what was

that I don't think AI can do the job

alone clearly I mean it needs a human to

input the information I don't think

you'd be able to sell it I don't think

you'd have a reader you know reading

through it that long you keep the reader

invested through the tone and through

the style and you know through just

having smart storytelling and the

unfolding of events this it was really

boring to read a lot of the AI stuff

because it again lacked that personality

do I think that AI will unemploy all

writers

it's possible why because of what's

going on in Hollywood the greed of um

you know certain Studios and big

corporations and you know they'll want

to make content make it badly but it's

you know easier if an AI thing can do it

really quickly and them just kind of

trying to make a quick book because well

we producer we filmed a blah blah who

cares if it's badly written It looks

interesting and people will watch it and

buy it but then they'll be disappointed

it's uh it's it's a that you know AI

could possibly take over jobs because as

you can see it's the work of an artist

and it sucks that AI poses a threat to

artists jobs it's already hard enough to

make a living as an artist but I'm very

glad that the writers are striking and

they're trying to get a contract that

helps them protect their rights if you

also want to support me an artist who

just finished editing this whole entire

video

I already know it's gonna be a pain and

who's in college for screenwriting

learning about this craft as you can see

I'm very passionate about this keep

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