Published June 27, 2023, 12:20 a.m. by Arrik Motley
The rise of AI poses a looming threat to Hollywood's film and tv industry.🤖 WGA screenwriters are striking against film studios in an attempt to regulate the use of AI in productions.🪧 Today, we are going to test whether AI can write popular television shows better than professional screenwriters.📝 Will AI be able to write compelling script scenes? Can this technology replace Hollywood writers? In this experiment, we'll compare the original pilot scripts of three popular shows, "wednesday," "succession," and "White Lotus," to the AI's version.👀 Subscribe, and I hope you enjoy the video!
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today we are going to test whether AI
can write popular television shows
better than Hollywood writers can AI
replicate the craft that goes into
writing a scene is it possible that AI
could replace all Hollywood writers and
become the new writer of your favorite
television shows we're going to find out
in this video AI taking over people's
jobs is a huge threat looming over a ton
of different professions right now I
actually watched a YouTube video where
AI tried to do different people's jobs
and a lot of the commenters were saying
that the people look like they're
threatened by all the AI and what it can
do if a robot was going to unemploy me
take my income in my livelihood you know
I would be threatened and defensive too
and the threat of AI has a choke hold on
the Hollywood film industry right now if
you saw my last video then you would
know a little bit about Ai and how
Hollywood writers are on strike because
the wga is trying to prevent AI from
replacing them in their jobs striking
writers say now is the time to address
AI I mean they're basically plagiarism
machines we set very specific parameters
around it it cannot be considered mirror
material you cannot rewrite with it
there must be a person associated with
it that will keep it constrained within
what it is a tool not an end goal or
Creator and if you saw my last video you
would know that I made a pretty bold
claim that AI could not do the job of a
writer they couldn't do it as well and I
was thinking Michaela have you even
tested this have you even tried to see
if it actually can write as good as a
Hollywood writer
today I'm going to put my bias and my
passions aside I'm going to give my
honest professional opinion I have been
reading scripts for 10 years of my life
ever since I was 9 years old I know what
a good script sounds like I've been
working in this industry for 10 years
I'm also studying screenwriting at USC
School cinematic Arts one of the top
film schools in the world
so I think I know how to tell what a
good script looks like it's already hard
enough to be an artist and make a living
so AI is just making it even harder but
if you want to support an artist be sure
to subscribe to this channel I plan and
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subscribed and just supported an artist
because ai's gonna take my job
[Music]
so Michaela how in the world are you
even going to test this technology we
are going to read original script scenes
from the pilots of three different TV
shows Wednesday White Lotus and
succession once we've read the scene I'm
gonna go over and tell AI to write a
scene and kind of describe what's going
on describe the characters and we'll see
what it does first we're going to start
with the Netflix hit Wednesday the
series creators are Miles Millar and
Alfred go so they must be writing
Partners yeah they're writing partners
because a lot of their credits are the
same they wrote Hannah Montana together
The Mummy for all the shows that we're
reviewing I'm only going to be reading
what's in the pilot scripts just so I
don't spoil anything if you guys haven't
seen the show stuff from Act One nothing
very important
well act one is actually a very
important act it's the setup Act without
it you don't know what's going on okay
fade in exterior Nancy Reagan High
School day to establish as All-American
as Hostess cupcakes and the NRA the sign
out front proudly declares Nancy Reagan
High School home of the Mustangs you can
already see the personality from the
first line of the action line as
All-American as Hostess CupCakes
interior hallway Nancy Reagan High
School day pre-class Insanity Reigns
students frantically crisscross the
frame through the Technicolor throng of
JanSport backpacks in Brandy Melville
ensembles one face stands out wearing a
signature black dress and two perfect
braids meet Wednesday Adams 15. her
legendary wit is still sharper and then
a razor wire and puberty has Amplified
her uniquely warped worldview she cuts a
line through her fellow students like a
great white through a school of tuna
they really like the similes here as she
walks she's met with looks of fear or
derision both of which secretly please
her the writer ties in you know sharper
than razor wire and then cuts it it adds
a tone I'm not sure whose Twisted idea
it was to put hundreds of adolescents
some underfunded schools
people whose dreams were crushed years
ago but I admire the sadism I want you
to imagine having to come up with this
while I'm reading it imagine coming up
with these words and these ideas these
came from humans because this is harder
than it looks go try up ahead she sees a
group of students gathered around a
locker muffled screams Echo from inside
as Wednesday approaches the teens
guiltily scatter suspicious she wrenches
open the locker door and out tumbles her
brother Pugsley Adams 13. he's been
hogtied with an apple shoved in his
mouth she unsympathetically Yanks the
Apple free the conciseness of this is
also very impressive because a lot of
people who are new to writing they try
and explain all that just happened in
very long chunks they get done
I want names don't normally work honest
he begins to blubber Wednesday's cool
demeanor cracks so fast because the
emotion equals weakness pull yourself
together now but when she grips the
shoulders her head whips back and she
experiences a psychic Vision it's liquid
and blurred at the edges in a series of
visceral flashes she sees Three teen
boys grab hugs and tile up and stuff him
in the locker all wear red and white
varsity jackets emblazoned with the
school's stallion mascot and water polo
Gods printed on the back the vision ends
the details that are there and what's
really smart is the writer chooses to
give this Exposition through you know
visual cues with the vision and all that
stuff instead of you know Pugsley saying
oh these boys beat me up you know what I
mean instead of giving Exposition
through dialogue which is usually it
doesn't go down well we don't digest
that type of food well it's hard to
swallow when we see it visually it's
smooth like butter okay and that type of
exposition is very smart and that's
something that I worry about with AI I'm
not sure if AI will be able to do that
much visual storytelling I feel like
it'll be very on the nose but we'll see
stay tuned Pugsley concerned are you
okay Wednesday nods collects herself
leave this to me Pugsley even more
concerned Wednesday what are you going
to do Wednesday smirks knowingly what I
do best off Wednesday a plan formulating
um also a little disclaimer I have not
seen um Wednesday comment down below if
I should watch it if it's worth my time
I know it was really popular cut to
underwater looking up at a collection of
muscular legs kicking furiously camera
Rises revealing we are interior swimming
pool Nancy Reagan High School day I love
that transition again it's thinking
visually the camera Rises it's showing
the director what you know they need to
take from this so the water polo team is
in mid-practice even in red Speedos
these dudes exude smarmy jock
entitlement and another thing about
screenwriting that I see all the time is
the writer tries to explain like the
type of vibe the energy that you see in
everyday life to try and kind of
translate to the reader like you know
how these background actors should be
portraying or how they should look so
when you're casting for background
actors they need to kind of look like
this I don't know if AI will be able to
be like oh they exude this energy like
how do you know what energy is Babe like
this video And subscribe you see all
that stuff I gotta edit that if that
subscribe button down there is red
red flag if it's gray oh we cool babe
you got good luck Wednesday emerges from
the tunnel under the bleachers and
approaches the pool she scans the
players until her eyes lock on the team
captain Dalton we recognize him as one
of pugliest tormentors from her Vision
Dalton regards her mockingly Dalton hey
freak this is a close practice the
others laugh in jeer but Wednesday
remains isily impervious to their taunts
the only person who gets to torture my
brother is me Wednesday pulls her hands
from behind her back and holds up two
large clear plastic bags each filled
with water and a dozen piranha with a
casual flick of her wrist she tosses the
bags into the water Bob's eyes go wide
flailing chaos erupts as the players
frantically swim for the sides Dalton
desperately swims for a ladder
underwater piranha POV swimming towards
him lured by the white number 23 on his
Speedos Wednesday observing the Mayhem
unfold with the cold it's happening of a
scientist watching the bikini Reef
blasts Dalton reaches the ladder is
about to haul himself up underwater
piranha POV as the lead leader of the
pack of zeros in on the white 23 on
Dalton Speedo off Dalton's Unholy
high-pitched screen smash cut two main
titles what I love again about that
whole sequence of action each Action
Line is basically for you know the
director to kind of Envision we're
cutting between dong and then the
piranha and then Wednesday we see each
POV as it's going on again it's thinking
visually also the creativity of thinking
about dropping piranhas and that is
visual Exposition as well because it's
showing Wednesday is ruthless and she's
unsympathetic maybe even sociopathic
finding a way an activity to show her
personality rather than somebody being
like you're so mean Wednesday and that
on the nose dialogue which is what I
worry about for AI now let's see the
ai's version so I just opened up chat
um I'm gonna ask it to do something for
me I'm gonna ask you to do some for me
can you do a song for me
write me a script called open to a
dramatic television show about a girl
named Wednesday she does not fit into
the preppy High School crowd she wears
dark colors and has an intimidating
demeanor Wednesday sticks out like sore
thumb include a beat where she finds her
brother Pugsley tied up in locker and
give Exposition about him getting
bullied Wednesday decides to get revenge
on her brother's bullies by surprising
the bullies at their water pool practice
with something dangerous send it
oh it's writing really quickly
okay
let's see what it wrote oh my gosh that
was really quick title Wednesday's
Revenge interior high school hallway day
the bustling hallway of a preppy High
School is filled with students chatting
and laughing among them Wednesday a
teenage girl with long dark hair dressed
in black from head to toe stands out
like a Gothic anomaly her intimidating
demeanor and unique style catch the
attention of her peers it definitely set
the environment of the hallway
um you know I just said at school but it
really put us in a location which is
exactly what the writers did it was in
the hallway I'm pretty sure I will say
that the Action Line doesn't have as
much personality as the writers you know
it conveyed this information in a very
basic way like saying a preppy high
school instead the writers said they're
wearing Brandy Melville and JanSport
it's getting very All-American like the
hostess so using those elements to not
exactly say that is basic but you know
from those brands that it is very basic
it's a smarter way to convey that
information without being very on the
nose and blunt about it by saying it's a
preppy High School interior High School
Walker area day Wednesday walks down the
quarter her heavy boots echoing with
each step okay including sound she
glances around observing the students
who pass by whispering and occasionally
shooting hers glances in her Direction
Wednesday stops in front of a row of
lockers her eyes narrowing as she senses
something amiss I like that you know
she's sensing something because it's
kind of how she had those special Senses
in the other scene through a sliver in
the locker we catch a glimpse of Pugsley
Wednesday's younger brother with a
disheveled appearance fear is evident in
his eyes and his mouth is taped shut
fear is evident in his eyes no that I
don't know about that that's bad to me
Wednesday whispering to herself Pugsley
Wednesday wastes no time she takes a
deep breath her resolve strengthening
and quickly reaches into her backpack
retrieving a small tool kit with expert
positions she scopefully unlocks a
locker freeing her distress brother yeah
it's too much explaining there hugsley
relieved Wednesday thank goodness you
found me they tied me up and left me
here see what I'm saying about the
dialogue Exposition they tied me up here
and left me like babe if we can see
visually that you are tied up you don't
need to say it Wednesday cuts the tape
off Pugsley's mouth
if he was talking
then but he had tapeovers
he had a line before that so how was he
talking if there was taper okay whatever
Wednesday angrily who did this to you
pugly Pugsley's face Falls his voice
trembling Pugsly nervously it's the
water polo team they've been tormenting
me for weeks Wednesday's eyes narrow a
dangerous glint reflecting her thirst
for justice Wednesday intense they won't
get away with this pugly I promise you
that we didn't need that line smart
writers they'll just be like off her
look you know and then made that line
reflecting a thirst for justice cut two
right off Wednesday's look we can
already tell that there's something
Brewing exterior High School pool day
[Music]
the real show
oh because it's water polo I was like
wait how did it know it was at a pool
but I inputted water polo so they know
Wednesday dressed in our signature dark
attire if we already said the Wardrobe
and she it's not a new day we don't need
to reset it again stands near the
entrance to the high school pool the
sounds of splashing water and laughing
emanate from within
Wednesday takes a deep breath composing
herself and reaches into her backpack
once again she pulls out a mysterious
object covered in dark cloth and grips
it tightly in her hand mysterious object
time to show them the consequences of
their actions
see how the other writers their dialogue
had so much personality this is like
infomercial and I know that you can
input even more information for the AI
to kind of mold it better to what you
want but we're just going off the first
draft with determination burning in our
eyes Wednesday slowly approaches the
glass entrance to the pool area she
pushes the doors open revealing the
unsuspecting water polo team practicing
in the pool the team members turn their
heads in surprise their smiles feeding
has a witness Wednesday's menacing
presence Wednesday coldly surprise boys
let's have some fun
as Wednesday step forward the camera
pans down to reveal what she holds in
her hand a remote control
what the cloth slips off revealing a
Sinister looking device with blinking
lights and a faint hum the water pool
team's faces twist into expressions of
shock and concern realizing that
Wednesday means business Fade Out note
the script is a fictional creation for
entertainment purposes remember to
handle sensitive subjects like revenge
and dangerous actions with caution and
promote positive resolutions in real
life situations
so that was the AI scene let's review
what did I like about it I was actually
very surprised at how it laid out you
know this sequence of scenes the
locations and kind of describing the
environment I was very impressed by
um what I didn't like or what I wasn't
very impressed with won the ending just
a random Sinister device clearly this
shows that if you are writing with AI
you really do have to help it out I'm
clearly seeing that this is more of a
tool for a writer as a writer you still
have to put together what is that
revenge or what is this you know what I
mean because an AI is not going to do it
it doesn't have that creativity I will
say that the AI seems like it could lay
out a very cool structure for you know
whatever you're writing but you really
have to fill it in really make it your
own add that flavor personalize the
dialogue so it doesn't just sound
boilerplate did the AI do better than
the actual writers
I would say no the AI did a first drop
version and granted this is the first
draft that I gave the AI but now it's
time to move on to the next show the
White Lotus arrivals episode one written
by Mike White
the genius Mike White who'd won an Emmy
for writing let's read the opening to
White Lotus fade in interior airplane
Day Shane 30s is handsome but looks like
he's been through the ringer a flight
attendant hands him a cocktail which he
gulps down sitting next to him is an
older couple he gulps down the cocktail
that already shows he's in distress that
is already telling us something not him
saying oh I'm so stressed out thank you
flight attendant like it's been a long
day I've really been through the ringer
obviously this opening scene is
different than what was actually printed
in the um you know Final Cut sitting
next to him is an older couple older
woman you headed home she nods absently
older woman us too I hate the end of
things especially vacations older man
what are we going back to world's gone
crazy
Shane forces a current smile Mike White
is so good with voices it just sounds
real
we were at the aminari it was fine the
food was good not much to do there but
we just like to sit around anyway which
hotel were you at
Lotus
White Lotus
our guide told us someone was
Sheen turns and looks at them Gravely
Shane while he's on our plane off their
reaction you didn't see them loaded on
the plane they shake their heads older
woman what is it on ice or older man
what happened Shane just shakes his head
at a loss older woman changes the
subject
well other than that did you have a good
vacation the woman Smiles Shane finishes
his drink then I only mean
congratulations how wonderful was it
everything you hoped
where's your wife yeah where's your wife
Shane says nothing but the English look
on his face silences the inquisitive
couple
the flight attendant passes Shane Taps
her as she passes Shane mumbles can I
get another drink
shoot the intended gives a perfunctory
nod heading off older man here take mine
the older man sends to Shane State
reaches over and drops his cocktail on
Shane's tray Shane doesn't even smile he
sculpt it down because the other couple
deserves with concern Shane sets Down
The Empty Glass and exhales deeply the
Roar of the plane's engine disrupts the
moment and we smash cut too and the fact
that he's avoiding the question about
the wife that in itself says so much
without saying anything it allows us the
audience to put the puzzle pieces
together thinking about the information
that we know the dead body and that his
wife is not there with him and that also
makes us as the audience want to watch
more to find out what happened now let's
see the AI version of White Lotus
write me an opening scene to a dramatic
television show about a man named Shane
who just finished a vacation in Hawaii
the scene takes place on an airplane
Shane looks exhausted something's
Weighing on him he asks a flight
attendant for a drink on the flight a
nearby couple of tourists try to chat
with Shane about how his vacation was
Shane is very open about the experience
please reveal that Shane was on his
honeymoon there's a dead body on the
plane and that his wife is not sitting
next to him on the flight send it
oh
oh it's really thinking it's really
thinking okay and here it is interior
airplane cabin day a weary looking Shane
late 30s sits by the window in an
airplane cabin his eyes fixed on the
passing clouds the hum of engines fills
the air as the plane makes its way
through the sky Shane appears exhausted
the weight of something heavy evident in
his expression a friendly flight
attendant approaches wearing a warm
smile I'm seeing a lot of parentheticals
right now and that is a big No-No you
usually don't tell the actor how to act
usually your line of dialogue should
kind of be a signal to the tone because
as you see in the White Lotus script
there's barely any parentheticals only
when there's a shift or really something
important but not directing the actor
this is directing the actor which is not
good flight attendant should Fleet good
afternoon sir how can I assist you Shane
gently can I have a drink please
something strong if you don't mind
that's good that's good AI really picked
up that he needed something strong that
he's stressed out that was a good line
my tent nods understanding the unspoken
request for Solace and heads toward the
beverage cart across the aisle a jovial
couple of tourists early 40s glance and
Shane's Direction their faces still
sun-kissed from a tropical vacation okay
I like that excitedly oh God these
parentheticals oh my gosh there's more
parentheticals hey there just got back
from Hawaii ourselves how was your trip
buddy it's bad dialogue but it's also
like the Taurus being annoying which is
good for the scene in a way because
Shane clearly doesn't want to deal with
anything so in a way that is kind of a
good choice having the characters be
completely opposite more fuel for Shane
to get more stressed out it's bad
dialogue but it works right now if that
makes sense Shane monotone it was fine
Taurus woman grinning oh come on Hawaii
is Paradise you must have had a blast
Shane's eyes drift toward the empty seat
behind him where his wife should have
been sitting he clenches his jaw his
knuckles turning white okay so that's
also an error film and television is a
visual medium just because you said in
an action line a very important thing
about where his wife should have been
sitting nobody when this is on screen
can read that action line so nobody's
gonna know based off a look that he
thinks his wife should be sitting there
that's a problem because that's a very
important information that nobody will
see only the reader of the script will
see you know what I mean that's more
like novel writing not screenwriting
Shane softly yeah Paradise for some the
flight attendant returns placing a drink
in front of Shane he gnaws appreciation
takes a long contemplative step as the
plane shakes slightly revealing hidden
turbulence the atmosphere grows tense a
commotion arises from the rear of the
cabin causing heads to turn Shane's eyes
widen as he notices the commotion his
heart pounding in his chest he glances
back spotting a group of panicked
passengers huddled around something his
Gaze fixates on a dead body covered in a
blanket carried by two flight attendants
making their way through the cabin the
reality of the situation hits him hard
his mind racing with disbelief Shane's
hands tremble causing his drink to spill
but he barely notices he searches the
cabin frantically desperately trying to
find his wife but
site the realization draws upon Shane's
face an ominous storm brewing within him
overshadowing the paradise he had just
left behind
Fade Out wow very dramatic at the end
um my camera died we have my Vlog camera
which is a very wide angle lens but I
guess you guys can see a little bit more
of like what's
on let's get into what I liked about the
scene the AI was able to make it Arc you
know it wasn't a stagnant scene
something happened at the end
um and things changed so I did really
enjoy that I also liked
um you know the first part was Shane and
the drink what I wasn't very impressed
by it feels very prose it feels very
novel-like there's too many action lines
and that's a trend there's way too many
parentheticals which is a huge no no no
no no no I also really like how it came
to the conclusion that you know the
realization that that's his wife like it
was able to allow us to put the puzzle
pieces together like Mike White did
about thinking well the wife is gone and
then oh there's a dead body except we as
the audience wouldn't know that the wife
is gone because he never said it you
know what I mean like it was just an
action line and there was no way for us
to tell because we're not reading a
script we're watching the TV show yeah
an ominous storm brewing within him
overshadowing the Paradigm like that all
that would be like off Shane's look we
you know what I mean manipulate
something like that like really short
did AI write White Lotus better than
Mike White
in my opinion it did not lastly we're
going to look at succession the pilot
script of succession written by Jesse
Armstrong interior room
black
the unsteady POV of someone groping
through a darkened room hands out ahead
bang a wall
the right is really putting us in the
scene the figure we're following wasn't
expecting that hands flat against the
wall hand over hand looking for an
opening oh my gosh even the choice of
the writer using fragments fragmented
sentences adds to that kind of like
disillusion right y'all don't understand
I'm a nerd I'm a nerd okay I'm grateful
that you're watching this far to be
honest Logan where the F am I okay
here's the opening our figure was
seeking
Marcia off screen Logan it's okay Logan
are guys in somewhere now into the room
he was seeking okay everything is okay
he knows what he's doing now Logan to
himself ugh okay okay the shuffle of bed
clothes as Mercia climbs out of bed then
we hear the sound of what water dripping
onto something soft and then boom lights
on and all is bright and Stark and
sudden and what do we have an 80 year
old man Logan Roy in his shorts and
t-shirt pissing towards a laundry basket
in a walk-in wardrobe lined with freshly
arrived suits and shirts dark urine
stutters across the Deep white pile of
thick carpet dampening it down like hot
piss on wet snow
I stand in solidarity with the wga keep
me keep these keep these Riders Logan is
momentarily terrified but then a younger
woman early 50s is in the doorway her
hands across her nakedness pulling
something on it's okay Logan where am I
Marcia it's okay we're in the new place
it's okay Logan New York 3 12 a.m he
computes this information as we cut from
Logan's rebooting face too and that's
the opening scene from succession
it's so hard also for me as a creative
to like explain what the writer's doing
when I see it especially because I've
been reading scripts for so long it's
just good and you know I'm gonna leave
it at that now let's see the AI version
of succession
write me an opening scene to a dramatic
television show about an old man who
wakes up in the middle of the night
looking for a bathroom in the dark he
struggles to find the bathroom and ends
up peeing on the floor of a closet when
the lights turn on we can tell that the
man lives a life of luxury based on the
New York City apartment and clothes in
the closet include a beat where his
spouse helps him out of the situation
interior luxury New York City Apartment
bedroom night a spacious bedroom
elegantly decorated with Rich fabrics
and tasteful artwork Moonlight filters
through the sheer curtains casting a
soft glow on the room in the dimly lit
space we see an elderly man John 70s
dignified yet frail stirring in his
sleep his eyes flare open and he Squints
into the darkness disoriented John
grumbling
gotta find the bathroom
so again it's on the nose but what did
we expect from AI slowly sits up his
movement's tentative as if the weight of
age burdens him Jon reaches for
Spectacles on the nightstand and puts
them on he swings his leg over the side
of the bed and gingerly places his feet
on the plush carpet exterior luxury New
York City Apartment hallway night so
we're outside
um John shuffles through the bedroom
door into a grand hallway adorned with
intricate paintings and antique
furniture his eyesight hindered by the
lack of light strains to make out his
surroundings John muttering which way is
it he hesitates then starts down the
hallway his steps slow and unsure as he
walks his grip tightens on the edge of
his bathrobe his knuckles turning white
interior New York City luxury apartment
walk-in closet night John pushes open a
door thinking it leads to the bathroom
instead he stumbles into a closet filled
with designer clothes and expensive
accessories he Squints trying to make
sense of his mistake okay what in the
world unaware of his surroundings John
fumbles with the tithes bathrobe
thinking it's the bathroom's light
switch she unties it unless the robe
fall open standing exposed in the
opulent closet suddenly the lights snap
on revealing the Grandeur of the Space
John's eyes widened in realization
embarrassment as he discovers his
mistake interior New York City luxury
apartment closet night this is really
long john spell house Elizabeth like 60s
elegant compassionate stands in the
doorway wearing a satin robe she looks
at John a mixture of amusement and
concern on her face Elizabeth teasingly
these freaking parentheticals darling I
think you've taken a wrong turn John's
face remnants and he tries to cover
himself hastily wrapping the bathrobe
around his body Elizabeth walks toward
him a gentle smile playing on her lips
Elizabeth softly come on dear let's get
you to the bathroom just take out the
action line and just have it Elizabeth
darling I think you've taken a wrong
turn come on let's get you to the
bathroom that's it you don't need all of
this stuff it's too much Elizabeth takes
John's hand and leads him out of the
closet guiding him through the hallway
her touch comforting and familiar the
scene Fades out leaving us with a sense
of the elderly couples enduring love and
the challenges they face together in
their world of luxury and aging
yeah who did it better AI or Jesse
Armstrong we don't even need an
explanation
for this specific scene I didn't like
anything I'm so
like anything of this but tell me if I'm
wrong leave a comment down below am I
wrong in conclusion do I think AI can
write better than Hollywood television
writers
no was I impressed with the AI yeah I
was actually really impressed at how
quickly it could create a scene with
actually some of the arcs of the scenes
and the way it was able to describe
different environments and characters
but I definitely can tell that it needs
the hand of a writer it needs the
creativity of a human it also includes a
lot of screenwriting faux pas overuse of
parentheticals and way too many action
lines that break up the flow of dialogue
it's just over descriptive it's way too
descriptive to me right now seems kind
of like a tool that writers can use in
the process of screenwriting AI is
constantly getting better and this was
already pretty good like AI can do a job
maybe not a good one it maybe can write
a better pilot than the idol
yes shade Throne Sam Levinson what was
that I don't think AI can do the job
alone clearly I mean it needs a human to
input the information I don't think
you'd be able to sell it I don't think
you'd have a reader you know reading
through it that long you keep the reader
invested through the tone and through
the style and you know through just
having smart storytelling and the
unfolding of events this it was really
boring to read a lot of the AI stuff
because it again lacked that personality
do I think that AI will unemploy all
writers
it's possible why because of what's
going on in Hollywood the greed of um
you know certain Studios and big
corporations and you know they'll want
to make content make it badly but it's
you know easier if an AI thing can do it
really quickly and them just kind of
trying to make a quick book because well
we producer we filmed a blah blah who
cares if it's badly written It looks
interesting and people will watch it and
buy it but then they'll be disappointed
it's uh it's it's a that you know AI
could possibly take over jobs because as
you can see it's the work of an artist
and it sucks that AI poses a threat to
artists jobs it's already hard enough to
make a living as an artist but I'm very
glad that the writers are striking and
they're trying to get a contract that
helps them protect their rights if you
also want to support me an artist who
just finished editing this whole entire
video
I already know it's gonna be a pain and
who's in college for screenwriting
learning about this craft as you can see
I'm very passionate about this keep
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